Wednesday, 18 December 2013

Happy Holidays & a What's Up Wednesday Reminder




Just a quick note to wish everyone a Happy Holiday. I'm hard at work on my manuscript for Pitch Wars and kind of left all my Christmas preparations till the last minute, so not much of a post from me. I'll just remind you that if you're taking part in What's Up Wednesday, you can sign up on the linky at Jaime's blog: here.

Also, What's Up Wednesday won't be happening for the next two weeks because of Christmas and New Years Day.

See you in 2014, everyone!

Wednesday, 11 December 2013

What's Up Wednesday

Hey everyone! I haven’t been around the blogs lately, seeing as I’ve been taking a break, but I thought I’d check in for this week’s What’s Up Wednesday. I’d also like to say thanks to everyone who left such sweet comments when my cat passed away. You guys are so thoughtful!

What I’m Reading:

Since my last post in October, I’ve managed to squeeze in quite a few books: Lovely, Dark and Deep by Amy McNamara, Allegiant by Veronica Roth, Anna Dressed in Blood by Kendare Blake, The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by Washington Irving, The Girl of Fire and Thorns/The Crown of Embers/The Bitter Kingdom by Rae Carson, Shiver/Linger/Forever by Maggie Stiefvater, Untold by Sarah Rees Brennan, and Warm Bodies by Isaac Marion. Out of those I’d have to say my favorites were The Girl of Fire and Thorns trilogy (amazing) and Untold, which is the second book in the Lynburn Legacy.

Now, I’m reading Champion by Marie Lu, and so far I’m really enjoying it. All except for the awful red font. Forever by Maggie Stiefvater also had red font, and while the books look lovely and it’s a unique idea, it makes my eyes feel like they’re bleeding.

What I’m Writing:

This is a big reason (one of many) why I’ve been absent from the blogs. I’ve been plugging away at the first draft of my current WIP, and I’m just about to the end. I have four more scenes left to write. I had hoped to be done much sooner, but life has gotten in the way, and I had to do some rewriting after finding a plot hole that needed its logistics hammered out (what a headache, but it’s all better now), and changing some aspects of the plot for other reasons. Can I just say that writing a sequel is gruelling? I’m looking forward to revising, but man, am I ever going to have to trim words. This thing is a beast. But it’s a beast with a good heart, I think.

What’s Inspiring Me Right Now:

How about the awesome news that Elizabeth Briggs chose me as an alternate for Pitch Wars? I’m pretty darn psyched about that, and I can’t wait to hear what advice she has for me! I did a happy dance around my Christmas tree when I found out. Actually, I was in the middle of decorating it at the time. I've never done Pitch Wars before, and now I'm very glad I entered.

What Else I’ve Been Up To:

For my birthday, my family went to see Catching Fire. I thought it was a big improvement over the first movie, which I liked but didn’t love. In my opinion, Catching Fire was pretty much spot on, other than a bit of extra emphasis on the love triangle, but I get why they did that. I also got books for my birthday, because what the heck else would I want, right? Those included: Origin by Jessica Khoury, Champion by Marie Lu, Finnikin of the Rock by Melina Marchetta, and Warm Bodies by Isaac Marion. Oh, and I got a fuzzy, new blanket at the bookstore as well—the perfect accessory for reading. As I'm sure most of you have figured out by now, we do most of our shopping at the bookstore. Now if only they’d add a grocery section.

I also went for dental surgery a couple days ago, and while it wasn’t nearly as bad as I thought, I’m not thrilled that I’ll be stuck eating all things soft and squishy for much, if not all, of the Christmas season. I suppose I could put turkey dinner in the blender, but I’m not so sure turkey smoothies are a tasty idea. Right now, I’m mostly eating apple sauce and plain pancakes. Not exactly fine dining. I’m longing for something crunchy, but more than anything, I hope my mouth heals up on time to enjoy some of the Gingerbread Ale and Eggnog Stout my hubby made for Christmas (Can’t have beer with stitches in your mouth or when you’re on painkillers. Bah humbug.)

There’s probably lots more I could add here, but I’ll leave it at that for now. This might not be a full return to the blogs for me yet. You know how the holiday season can be. In any case, I wanted to stop in and say hello, let you know I’m still alive, and share my Pitch Wars news. I hope the holiday season is going well for every one of you!

Monday, 14 October 2013

A Break

I just wanted to post a quick note to say that I’ll be taking a hiatus from the blogs. Last week, we found out our cat, Elfie, had cancer. Only a few days later, on Sunday morning, she passed away. It’s Thanksgiving here in Canada, but unfortunately at our house we aren’t feeling very festive. Elfie was part of our family for sixteen and a half years, and we'd had her since she was a kitten. My husband and I adopted her and her sister from our local SPCA the first year we were married, so we’re finding this very difficult. I’ve needed a break for quite a while now, and this seems like the appropriate time. I’m not sure how long I’ll be away, but I wish you all luck in your writing endeavors in the meantime.


Wednesday, 9 October 2013

What's Up Wednesday

Happy Wednesday, everyone! If you aren’t familiar with What’s Up Wednesday, it’s a blog hop created by my sister Jaime and me, intended to help writers keep in touch with one another. If you’d like to participate, please sign up on the linky below, and be sure to spread some writerly encouragement around to at least a few other people taking part.

What I’m Reading:

I’m about halfway through Pulse by Patrick Carman. You can take a look at the very cool cover to the right of this post. I’m still working my way through The Odyssey by Homer and Ender’s Game with my son. As usual when I’m drafting, my reading time tends to be minimized. Once I’m done this first draft, I might have to reward myself with a weekend of nothing but reading. That would be bliss.

What I’m Writing:

I mentioned last week that I’ve been reworking the order of certain plot details. For any of you who watched that episode of New Girl where Winston was putting together the puzzle (you know, with some of the pieces backwards, others jammed together all willy-nilly), that was me trying to piece together my plot. Not pretty. It involved hacking some scenes apart, mixing them around, integrating a few scenes better to tighten things up, rewriting bits, and drafting some entirely new scenes. Yeah, it’s been busy and seemingly never-ending.  I’m FINALLY reaching the end of this string of scenes though, and I’m glad I took the time to rip them up. This wasn’t a task I could leave for the revision stage. In order to keep my plot threads straight, it had to be done now, and all said and (almost) done, I think my WIP is far better off for it. In the next couple of days, I’ll be venturing into Act 3.

What’s Inspiring Me Right Now:

A much needed Skype session with my sister, Jaime. When you’re in the thick of drafting and plot construction, it can be easy to lose perspective on your own story. I’m not sure about you, but I tend to see the flaws: all the seams where I’ve tacked things together, little plot holes that have yet to be filled, stretches where the excitement plateaus. Sure, I can fix those things in the revision stage, but sometimes to get through drafting you need someone else to have faith in your story, especially when you’ve misplaced yours. So a big thanks to my sister for renewing my confidence in the plot of this WIP.

What Else I’ve Been Up To:

This weekend, my family went to the Strawberry Ranch, a local farm that grows a corn maze every year. We’ve done the maze once before, and much to our surprise, it was trickier than it looked! Seeing as the weather was gorgeous, we decided to tackle this year’s maze, which, from an aerial view, was designed in the shape of a caribou. Throughout the maze, there were facts about caribou, so it was a bit of an educational field trip at the same time.  I left the navigating to my boys and just enjoyed the blue skies and the wind rattling through the corn husks while I wandered after them. It was a lot of fun and very relaxing. The maze is only open until mid-October and it isn’t open in the evening, but I always think it would be a blast to try this on Halloween night!


 So what’s up with you this fine fall day?


Wednesday, 2 October 2013

What's Up Wednesday

Hey, folks! It’s time for What’s Up Wednesday again! In case you’re new to WUW, it’s a blog hop created by my sister Jaime and me, intended to help writers keep in touch with one another. If you’d like to participate, please sign up on the linky below, and be sure to spread some writerly encouragement around to at least a few other people taking part. Because my sister is awesome, and she’s apparently a button factory, she made a lovely new autumn themed button for us. Please help yourself to it!


What I’m Reading:

I’m still reading Crown of Midnight by Sarah J. Maas, but I only have a few chapters left. Seriously, if I didn’t have so many other things to do, I could easily have devoured this book in one sitting.



What I’m Writing:

Plotting, plotting, and more plotting. Every time I think I have my plot details sorted out, I find some wrinkle in my plans. It’s not so much the details themselves as how they all need to fit together seamlessly. That’s okay though, because while I mull these things over, usually some juicy new details work their way into the mix. Eventually (meaning hopefully this week) I’ll figure out how to arrange it so all those scenes play out like a nice, smooth line of dominoes falling over.


What Inspires Me Right Now:

Wind and rain and tree branches beating against the house at night while I write. The way our yard looks like Rivendell with a constant shower of yellow leaves falling. Season premieres of TV shows with horrible, unbelievably shoddy writing that make me determined to create better stories. Pumpkins.

What Else I’ve Been Up To:

For whatever reason, I always seem to mention beverages in my posts. I suppose that’s because many writing sessions, relaxing moments, or fun times are accompanied by something good to drink, so…

When my son decided to go play bocce with his grandparents this weekend, the husband and I had an impromptu date at Winston’s English Pub. I’ve mentioned their Guinness beef stew in a bread bowl before, but this time I included a picture. Call me boring, but I ordered it again because it was just so freaking good. And the concept of a bread bowl just appeals to my practical side. And my stomach. The Cobblestone stout I ordered was much to my liking, but my husband’s Rogue chocolate stout may have been one of the best things I’ve ever tasted. Absolutely amazing.

And at the risk of sounding like all we do is drink beer, we then went home and made a batch of PUMPKIN stout, which should be ready on time for Halloween. How fun is that?! Mostly I sat on the kitchen floor and read Crown of Midnight while my husband (who has his system all worked out) did the important steps, but I pitched in when he needed a hand. We’re calling this latest homebrew “Monster Mash,” a little play on words seeing as the soaking grains used to make beer are referred to as “mash.” If I have time, I might even design a fun label for the bottles. We’ll see.


Oh yes. One other thing I've been doing is taking pictures of pumpkins. You probably caught that though. I couldn't resist, especially since one of them met a sad (but hopefully noble) end in the pumpkin stout and deserved to be immortalized before drank.

Care to share what’s happening with you these days?



Wednesday, 25 September 2013

What's Up Wednesday


Welcome back to What’s Up Wednesday! If you aren’t familiar with WUW, it’s a blog hop created by my sister Jaime and me, intended to help writers keep in touch with one another. If you’d like to participate, please sign up on the linky below, and be sure to spread some writerly encouragement around to at least a few other people taking part.

What I’m Reading:

I just finished Descendant by Lesley Livingston, which is the second book in the Starling series. If you’re not familiar, it revolves around mythology, particularly Norse and feels sort of like a YA Percy Jackson.

Now, I have my nose stuck in Crown of Midnight by Sarah J. Maas. Seeing as I’ve heard awesome things about it, and since I gave Throne of Glass a five star rating, I’m pretty excited about this one. Especially the bits about Chaol. Do I really need to explain why?

I’m also continuing to read Ender’s Game to my son, and gradually working my way through The Odyssey by Homer.

What I’m Writing:

Sigh. There just aren’t enough hours in the day. I’m trying to balance some last revisions on my ms with drafting the sequel. After getting beta feedback, there were some things I wanted to fix, change, trim, etc. before tossing my ms back out there for agents, but I’m also totally absorbed in drafting right now. As a result, both tasks are going a little slower than I’d like.  Of course, there’s not much point in writing a sequel if the first story doesn’t go anywhere, which is why I need to hurry up and get back into querying it. Somehow that hasn’t slowed the flow of creative juices though, and book two won’t leave me alone. But when it boils down to it, I’m writing it for me. I spent a good chunk of time this past week fleshing out a particular plot line that was feeling a little thin, and now that I’ve redone my outline for that section of the story, it feels like everything is falling into place (at least I'm crossing my fingers that it is).

What Inspires Me Right Now:

I know I’ve mentioned this before, but the Oblivion soundtrack has been a constant source of inspiration lately. It’s composed by Joseph Trapanese (who worked with Daft Punk on the Tron: Legacy soundtrack) and M83 (a French electronic band) and is this incredible hybrid score that combines a traditional symphony with a more modern sound. I never used to be able to listen to music when I wrote, but gradually I’ve come to depend on it to get me in the “writing zone.” This soundtrack brings on the urge to write whenever I hear it, because the tone of it perfectly captures the bittersweet quality I often aim for in my stories.

Here’s a gorgeous piece from Oblivion entitled “I'm Sending You Away.” Enjoy!



                                                        


What Else I’ve Been Up To:

This past Sunday, I attended The Word on the Street book and magazine festival, where I was fortunate enough to hear Robert J. Sawyer, an award-winning science fiction author, speak . He had some very insightful things to say that could easily be applied to other genres as well. If you’d like to read more about that, you can find my post here. I’ve included my favourite tips from Mr. Sawyer in that post.

So what’s up with you lately?




Monday, 23 September 2013

The Word on the Street Festival


Yesterday, Saskatoon hosted THE WORD ON THE STREET, a local version of the national book and magazine festival that’s become an annual event in several Canadian cities. I think it’s wonderful that my community goes the extra mile to promote literacy and celebrate reading, and in turn gives authors an opportunity to showcase their books.  Around our main branch library, the streets were blocked off to make room for poetry readings, puppet shows, book displays, author lectures and signings. What better way to enjoy a gorgeous fall afternoon?

Part of the festival was a workshop given by Robert J. Sawyer, which I was lucky enough to attend. If you’re not familiar with Mr. Sawyer, he’s a Hugo and Nebula award-winning Canadian science fiction author, who’s written twenty-two novels, including Flashforward and Mindscan. The topic for his talk was: A Thematic Approach to Science Fiction, but I think many of the things he said could be applied to other genres of writing as well, especially those that are issue oriented.

The focus of his lecture was choosing a theme for your novel that will make it stand out. Now, obviously most of what he said applies to commercial fiction, so keep that in mind if you’re reading this. These are a few of the nuggets of wisdom he passed on to those of us hoping to someday be published:

Choose a hot button issue as opposed to those that have been done before. People will rally around a controversial topic, because it creates discussion, and because they are generally more intrigued by such issues than characters and action. In short, that’s what will draw people in and make your book both relevant and memorable.

Write the novel that’s hard to write. In the easy novel, your character will be comfortable with the thematic statement you make. In the hard novel, however, your character will be at odds with the main theme, which creates conflict. He used the example of The Chamber by John Grisham to explain this. Had John Grisham taken the easy route, his book would have been about an innocent convict on death row and the lawyer trying to prevent him from getting the death penalty. Only mildly interesting at best. Instead, Grisham wrote the hard novel, one about a convict that admits he committed a heinous murder, says given the chance he would do it again, and the lawyer who has to defend him despite his guilt. Clearly, that’s the more interesting story due to the moral dilemma it creates in relation to a theme that involves the death penalty.

Present a range of opinions that explore your theme and create a debate within your story. It’s tough to write a novel that people will embrace that only presents one point of view.

Write something fundamentally and profoundly different, or find a twist that provides a new way of exploring well-trodden territory.

What’s marketable is not being able to say something, but having something to say.


These were my favourite points that he made, and I think they sum up the gist of his lecture. It was exciting to see an author whose work I very much enjoy and a valuable experience to hear him share some of what he’s learned during his successful writing journey. I feel like in writing the ms I’m currently querying, I instinctively tried to do what he’s suggested, but listening to him articulate these thoughts gave me a new lens for viewing future story ideas. In all, a workshop well worth attending!


Wednesday, 18 September 2013

What's Up Wednesday

Welcome to my What’s Up Wednesday post for this week! If you aren’t familiar with WUW, it’s a blog hop created by my sister Jaime and me, intended to help writers keep in touch with one another. If you’d like to participate, please sign up on the linky below, and be sure to spread some writerly encouragement around to at least a few other people taking part.

What I’ve Been Reading:

This weekend I finished my ARC of The Dream Thieves. In case you didn’t see my post on this, our local independent bookstore gave me an ARC just on time to read it before the actual release date. Not only did I absolutely LOVE it, but I’ve discovered that I’m not capable of reading a Maggie Stiefvater book quickly. I have to savour every single beautiful word. As with The Raven Boys, I was completely invested in the characters, and Adam continues to break my heart whenever he’s on the page. Without giving any spoilers, there were a couple of scenes involving Blue that were incredibly sweet, each for different reasons. I enjoyed getting a deeper look into Ronan’s mind as well. Heck, even Chainsaw had me mesmerized. I can't wait until book three comes out. This next year is going to be cruel and unusual punishment, especially seeing as I have a theory about one thing I think might happen and I want to know if I’m right.

Now, I’ve got three books on the go, which is ridiculous since I’m busy writing and don’t have much time for reading. I’m still partway through Descendant by Lesley Livingston. I’m reading Ender’s Game with my son before the movie comes out. Plus, I’m working my way through The Odyssey by Homer, which I love.

What I’ve Been Writing:

A couple weeks ago, I mentioned I was working on THE chapter that everything in my trilogy hinges on. Well, I finished it. I’m not exactly sure what I think of the first half of the scene—kind of waffling back and forth on what I should keep or cut—but I’m very happy with the second half. The especially important bit played out exactly as I pictured it. Whew! I’ve written a few more scenes since (one that I was waiting forever to write, and yes, it involved kissing) and while I’m right in the heart of the good stuff and things are going to very quickly speed up in terms of the plot, I’m sort of mulling over and tinkering around with some of the details. I’m a planner, but it’s impossible to foresee how every little piece of the plot will unfold until you’re actually writing it. I’m behind where I wanted to be in drafting at this point, but I’m enjoying the writing, so I’m not too disappointed about that.

What Inspires Me Right Now:

Fumiko Ishioka, the teacher responsible for piecing together the story of Hana’s Suitcase. This woman went to incredible lengths to discover the history behind a suitcase she acquired from Auschwitz, and to teach students about the Holocaust. Fumiko followed the suitcase's trail until she was able to locate Hana's brother, George, who survived Auschwitz and eventually settled in Canada. She gave George the opportunity to share Hana's tragic story, as well as his own, with her students in Japan. Now, because of her efforts, children the world over can learn about Hana Brady’s life and the prejudice that ended it. If you haven’t read the book Hana’s Suitcase or watched the companion documentary, Inside Hana’s Suitcase, I highly recommend them. And if you’re a parent or teacher looking for good World War II resources, be sure to check these out.


And also, Terry Fox. See below...

What Else I’ve Been Up To:

On Sunday, my family participated in the annual Terry Fox Run to raise money for cancer research. I walked 5k with my in-laws, while my boys ran the 10k. If you’re not familiar with Terry Fox, he’s a Canadian hero. Terry lost his leg, and ultimately his life, to cancer. In 1980, despite being an amputee, he attempted to run across Canada in an effort to create awareness about the disease and raise funds for research. His goal was to raise one dollar for every Canadian. He made it halfway (5373 km/3339 miles) before his Marathon of Hope was cut short when his cancer returned and made it impossible to continue. He died just months later at the age of 22. Terry’s story is one of courage, determination, and sacrifice. To honour his memory and continue his legacy, it’s become a family tradition to participate in this event every year. If you’re interested in reading more about Terry, you can do so: here.

I also watched some interesting things this week. Firstly, my son and I watched the documentary, Inside Hana’s Suitcase, as mentioned above. In the realm of fun, we watched Star Trek Into Darkness again (awesome from start to finish), as well as the Lumineers and Jake Bugg itunes festival concerts on TV (both were great). We also tuned in to the pilot for Sleepy Hollow, which was fun and the perfect amount of creepy leading up to Halloween. Also, Ichabod Crane is a vast improvement over the old Disney version. If you don’t believe me, look him up.

Other than that, there was far too much buffalo chicken pizza, some raspberry porter to compliment The Dream Thieves, guzzling of the new chocolate chai latte at Starbucks and, as always, book shopping.


So what’s up with you these days?


Thursday, 12 September 2013

#PitMad Twitter Party

Just a quick note to say that I'll be taking part in #PitMad on Twitter today. I've got a few different 140 character pitches put together, so we'll see if I can drum up any interest in my ms.

#PitMad is from 8am-8pm EST today, so if you have a completed ms and a pitch, I'd encourage you to take the plunge too. You never know what could happen!

Good luck to anyone else participating in #PitMad! I hope you have some great results!

Wednesday, 11 September 2013

What's Up Wednesday: Relaunch

In lieu of a regular post today, Jaime and I have decided to reintroduce What's Up Wednesday now that Ready. Set. WRITE! is finished. This seemed appropriate with the season change and considering the number of people who are now taking part. Plus, there are newbies jumping on board that might want some details.

Jaime put together this little blurb, and seeing as she went to the trouble and I’m having a busy week, I thought it would be easiest if I just quote her. If you’re planning on taking part in WUW, please read this. Take it away, Jaime…

I’ve had a few people ask me recently whether What’s Up Wednesday will be continuing now that Ready. Set. WRITE! is done. We—Erin and I—just wanted to let everyone know that yes, What’s Up Wednesday will still be happening right here every Wednesday. (We actually started WUW back in April and tacked the RSW writing intensive on solely for the summer months.)

So we figured a bit of a re-launch was in order! For those of you thinking of joining us and for those of you who are old pros at this, here’s a rehash of what it’s all about:

My sister, Erin, and I wanted a brief way to touch base with our writing friends every week, even when things got really busy and we felt otherwise unmotivated to blog. So What’s Up Wednesday was born, intended to be a weekly blog hop with other folks on this writing journey. With that aim in mind, we would encourage you to visit a few other WUW blogs each week, get to know some other writers, and spread some writerly encouragement around.

Just a little reminder: I know this goes without saying since we’re all book-lovers here, but disparaging comments about authors, books, and even genres or categories is kind of uncool. It’s that whole walk in someone else’s shoes thing, you know? Please be thoughtful and respectful.

To mark the re-launch of What’s Up Wednesday, I’ve created some new buttons! Feel free to choose one you like. (They can be found individually under my WUW tab above.) Remember to leave your link in the widget so others can find your post. And similarly, don’t forget to link back here so others who want to participate will know where to sign up.

We’re looking forward to hearing what’s up with you!

In case you're new to WUW, the four headings for each post are as follows:

What I'm Reading
What I'm Writing
What Inspires Me Right Now
What Else I've Been Up To

If you're unsure, just take a look at this previous post as an example.

Here’s a peek at the sweet new buttons Jaime whipped up. If you’d like to snag one or all of them for your WUW posts, you can find individual versions in the WUW tab at the top of my blog. If you prefer the old button, feel free to keep using it. You can sign up for WUW on Jaime’s site. I'll be including the linky here soon, but for some reason I can't get it working right now.


So that’s it for this week! We hope you’ll continue to join us on Wednesdays! And if you're new to WUW we'd like to extend a big welcome!


Monday, 9 September 2013

Ravin' About Ravens

This weekend, with the release of The Dream Thieves quickly approaching (September 17th), I decided I’d better pre-order my copy. Our local independent bookstore, McNally Robinson (the one with the tree staircase, for those of you who remember the picture I posted of it), is one of about a dozen lucky stores in Canada that will be giving away collector postcards with pre-ordered books. The postcards feature artwork by Maggie Stiefvater, which, in my opinion, is incredibly cool. You can check that out at Maggie’s site: here.

So we trekked off to the bookstore and placed our order. Weirdly, the girl working behind the counter in the children’s/YA section hadn’t heard anything about the souvenir postcards. I tried to impress upon her just how lucky we are that one of the best YA authors in existence included our store in her giveaway. I know, it’s just a postcard, but it’s got Blue kissing “someone” on it, and it’s a reward from Maggie (well, probably Scholastic) for shopping at independent bookstores. And hello, the fact that Saskatoon was included just thrills me.

Anyway, we left the store with an armful of books, went for coffee at Starbucks (the new chocolate chai latte is delicious BTW), picked up a few pizzas for supper, and headed home. While we were out, someone left a voicemail for us. It was McNally Robinson letting us know they had an ARC of The Dream Thieves and it was ours if we wanted it. IF we wanted it?!! Uh, YEAH!

After horking down some pizza, we headed back across town to the bookstore to pick up the ARC. It’s only just over a week until the actual book comes out, but it’s still exciting to have an early copy of it in my hands, especially after voicing my extreme jealously to those of you who’ve already read it. We kept our actual copy on order, because I obviously want a nice hardcover to match The Raven Boys, and of course, I want the postcard (not to mention then Maggie still makes some moola off of us, as will the store that so kindly gave us the ARC).

I’m about a third of the way through The Dream Thieves, and not surprisingly, I’m hanging on every word. And I think I’m enjoying it even more for the fact that it was so unexpected to get to read it early.


Wednesday, 4 September 2013

What's Up Wednesday/RSW Giveaway Winners Announcement


Let’s start off this What’s Up Wednesday post with the results of our Ready. Set. WRITE! end of summer giveaway. The following people are the winners of a critique for the first ten pages of their WIP, given by the co-hosts of RSW:


Carrie-Anne Brownian
Prerna Pickett
Robin Moran
Liz Parker
Dawn Allen

If you’re one of our winners, please email your first ten pages as an attachment to katy.upperman[at]live.com by October 31st. This should give you some time to take care of any necessary revisions.  We also ask that your pages be double-spaced. To be clear, each winner will receive one critique from one host of RSW. Finally, please bear in mind that none of us are pros at this. We’re just fellow writers trying to make a go of it like you, so what we’re offering is essentially a fresh set of eyes, an honest opinion on your story intro, and perhaps a squee or two. (kidding on that last one…maybe.) Congratulations to our five winners! We’re looking forward to hearing from you!

And now, onto other things…


What I’m Reading:

This week I finished Siege and Storm by Leigh Bardugo. Despite my slow progress through the book, I thoroughly enjoyed it and thought it earned every bit of praise people have given it. And after hearing so much talk about Sturmhond, my verdict is that he’s definitely a new favourite.

Now I’m less than a chapter into Descendant by Lesley Livingston. It’s the sequel to Starling, and I’ve been waiting for it to come out for ages.

What I’m Writing:

This week I wrote around 4000 words. I’m now smack in the middle of THE chapter. It’s the midpoint in my trilogy and basically the crux of the whole story. I’ve been eager to write this particular set of scenes for over a year now, so naturally I’m nervous about how it will all turn out. So far so good, but I keep having to stop and mull things over. Let’s just say this part is very different in the context of the entire story, and I’m bracing myself for the fact that I’ll probably tear it apart and rewrite it at least a few times.

What Inspires Me Right Now:

The new Jane Eyre t-shirt my sister gave me. I absolutely LOVE the quote on it: I am no bird, and no net ensnares me: I am a free human being with an independent will. That quote actually fits my current WIP perfectly, not to mention it’s just a super cute t-shirt and makes me feel all literary when I wear it. Plus, I adore Jane Eyre.

I’m also inspired and incredibly encouraged by more awesome beta feedback. To the lovely ladies who beta read for me, I feel totally validated by your comments and not like I’m just puttering around at this for kicks anymore, so thanks again!


What Else I’ve Been Up To:

Visiting my sister and her husband, which involved: supper at one of our favourite restaurants (The Broadway Café), book and tea shopping (yes, at more than one bookstore), eating way too much ice cream, discussing our stories, and generally just hanging out. It went by much too quickly. :(

Switching into autumn mode. Technically, it isn’t fall yet and the weather has still been hot here during the day, but as soon as September 1st hits, I have pumpkins and changing leaves and woolly sweaters on the brain. At this moment, I’m drinking Pumpkin Chai tea from David’s and it’s delicious. FYI, it’s the only “pumpkin” tea I’ve come across that actually lists squash in the ingredients. Usually it’s just rooibos with pumpkin pie spices (blah), and in my opinion that’s just a rip off. I’ll have to stock up before the season ends.

Other than that, it’s been business as usual around here: housework, schoolwork, and writing every spare minute I can get.

So what’s up with you lately? If you’d like to share, just sign up on the linky at Jaime Morrow’s site.

Wednesday, 28 August 2013

What's Up Wednesday/Ready. Set. WRITE!

Happy Wednesday, everyone! As I mentioned last week, it’s now the end of Ready. Set. WRITE! This summer flew by so fast my head is spinning, and while I’ve gotten a lot written, there are still tons of words rattling around in there waiting to get out. I hope you all enjoyed our summer writing incentive and that you’ll continue to be dedicated to your WIPs and encourage one another throughout the writing process. Speaking of encouragement, my RSW co-hosts and I are offering 10-page critiques to five RSW participants. If you’ve been hard at work this summer and would like a fresh set of eyes on your story, feel free to enter the giveaway with the rafflecopter at the end of this post. We’ll be announcing the winners next Wednesday. Thanks again to everyone who participated and made our summer writing challenge a huge success!

What I’m Reading:
Seeing as I had a good writing week, I didn’t get much reading done. I’m still poking away at Siege and Storm and regret that I’ve had to read it only a few pages at a time, because I really am enjoying it. Seriously, it’s taking me so long to get through it’s embarrassing.

What I’m Writing:
My goal last week was to outline the next string of scenes in my WIP and write 1000 words. Once I sorted out a couple details, my outline fell into place very quickly. Love it when that happens. That freed up the rest of my week to focus on actual writing. I wrote just over 5300 words, and I’m now in the thick of the scenes I’ve been waiting ages to write. I’ve pictured these scenes for so long, and I hope I can get them onto the page the way I’ve played them over in my head. That’s always the challenge, isn’t it?

What’s Inspiring Me Right Now:
Weirdly enough, glow bracelets.  They factor into the scenes I’m writing these days, so wearing a couple gets me in the frame of mind for my story’s setting. Plus, THEY’RE FUN!


What Else I’ve Been Up to:
Tinkering around with the new Kobo Arc tablet my hubby bought me.  I’m not a techie person, but this thing is so cool, and incredibly handy while I write. How nerdy is it that the first app I downloaded was for Dictionary.com?

Watching episodes of New Girl. I’m not-so-secretly infatuated with Schmidt.

Drinking pretty sparkling juices imported from England. My husband rides his bike to work during the summer and often comes home with fun beverages in his bike bag. You name it: tea, beer, wine, juice. I should start calling his bike the Beverage Mobile. If people knew what he had in there, I’m not kidding, they’d shove a stick in his spokes and mug him.

Getting ready for the school year. Still can't believe summer is almost done.

Waiting for my sister and her hubby to arrive from Alberta. By the time this posts, they’ll already be here, and I’m super excited! Jaime and I will be able to discuss story stuff in person and that’s always awesome! The guys will likely be banished to the man cave aka the rec room. Oh wait! Their car just pulled up! Yay!

So what’s up with you this week? If you’d like to share, go ahead and leave your link on Jaime Morrow’s site. Also, if you participated in RSW, remember to enter our critique giveaway on the rafflecopter below.




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Wednesday, 21 August 2013

What's Up Wednesday/Ready. Set. WRITE!

Summer is very quickly winding down, and that means the end of Ready. Set. WRITE! Next Wednesday is the finish line for our writing challenge, and we want to cap things off with another giveaway. Seeing as you’ve all been hard at work for the last couple months, my co-hosts and I are offering critiques to five RSW participants. None of us are pros at this, but if you’d like a fresh pair of eyes on the first ten pages of your story, then feel free to enter the contest with the rafflecopter during What’s Up Wednesday next week. Thank you so much to everyone who took part in our writing incentive this summer. We hope you’ve found it as helpful and productive as we have, and we encourage all of you to keep plugging away at writing and supporting one another through the process.

What I’m Reading:

I’m still working my way very gradually through Siege and Storm.  I keep hearing people say they love Sturmhond, and I’m eager to find out why. So far he seems like an interesting addition to the cast of characters.

What I’m Writing:

The goal I set last week was to write 2000 words, which I did, thanks to an out of town football game that kept my boys busy on Saturday and gave me some much needed writing time. My word count for the week was just over 4100. That's a good chunk right there, but I have to confess it was a bit of a slog. The middle section of my story has hit a plateau in terms of what’s happening, and it’s feeling a little muddled to me. Must fix that.

My goal this week is to outline the next string of scenes. In my original outline, I treated this all as one big scene, but it’s become clear to me that it needs to be broken down and also that I really need to think through the logistics of it. I’ll also aim to get 1000 words written.

What Inspires Me Right Now:

Feedback from betas. Since I don’t know if I’ll ever be published, each time someone reads my manuscript it makes the work feel just a bit more worthwhile. It’s also supremely cool that Elodie read my book on the beach in Italy this past week. How awesome is that? I didn’t go away on vacation this summer, but at least my book did!

Snow Patrol has also been inspiring me lately. Not a big surprise since they’re my all-time favourite band. The songs Make This Go On Forever, Open Your Eyes, and New York all perfectly fit the tone of a particular scene I just wrote.

What Else I’ve Been Up To:

This week mostly involved a massive purge of our house. And when I say massive, I mean we got rid of a huge chunk of what we own. The problem with basements and closets is that they tend to fill up over the years. I’m also horribly sentimental about things, especially anything that belongs to my son. Considering he’s now taller than me, it was high time to part with more of the baby/little kid stuff that was hanging around. So picture me sniffling—all right, even bawling my head off at one point—while sorting things into the garbage, recycling, or donation pile. Who am I kidding? That “pile” filled our entire living room and then some.  While it’s hard to part with certain belongings, we’re big on simplifying things around here, and so diminishing the clutter was also very freeing in a sense.

Now I need to apply the same principles to my writing: simplify, reduce the clutter, get rid of parts I’m hanging onto for purely sentimental reasons!!!

Not the most exciting week, but a very productive one. Care to share what’s going on with you lately? If you’d like to take part in What’s Up Wednesday, you can sign up on the linky at Jaime Morrow’s site.


Wednesday, 14 August 2013

What's Up Wednesday/Ready. Set. WRITE!


Hi everyone! This is going to be short and sweet today. My husband is on holidays from work, and we have a ton of stuff to get done, so...

What I'm Reading:

A few days ago, I finished Such Wicked Intent by Kenneth Oppel. I thought it was a great follow up to This Dark Endeavor, and I can't wait for the final installment in the trilogy. Now, I'm very gradually poking my way through Siege and Storm by Leigh Bardugo. I wish I could sit down and gobble the whole thing up all at once, but things are busy so it's been a few pages here and there. So far I'm enjoying it.

What I'm Writing:

My goal last week was to add in some research that I did. I met my goal although the
particular chapter I worked on is going to need some serious revising.

I'm aiming to get 2000 words done this week. The boys are headed to a football game this weekend, which means some writing time for me. Hopefully, I can get back into the swing of things!

What's Inspiring Me Right Now:

The Oblivion soundtrack. We watched the movie the other night and really enjoyed it, despite its flaws. I absolutely loved the music, especially the main theme. I've been listening to it while dejunking our basement, and it's making me want to write.

What Else I've Been Up To:

We're trying to sandwich work around the house between two weekends of fun stuff while my husband is on holidays. Here's a quick list of what my week has included: a wonderful parcel from my awesome sister, my husband's birthday, cupcakes, coffee with the in-laws and an old friend of ours, the bookstore, out for supper at Boston Pizza, watched Oblivion, chocolate covered strawberries, wine, coffee porter, visiting friends, Irish cream and sticky toffee pudding ice cream cones, Chinese food, watched Star Trek Into Darkness (which was amazing btw), went to Winston's English Pub, Fuller's London Porter, Stir Stick Stout, Guiness beef stew in a bread bowl, reorganizing and dejunking our house.

So how has your week been? If you'd like to share, go ahead and sign up on the linky at Jaime Morrow's site. We're winding down for Ready. Set. WRITE! now, and I hope all of you have had a successful week working on your WIPs. I apologize in advance for the likelihood of being very slow at responding to comments and getting to other blogs this week. :)